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Library Visit

Matt Hobbs

11/17/2017

ENG 110C

Library Assignment: Evaluating and Choosing a Source

For the last writing prompt, we needed an outside source to incorporate into our essays. My essay is about how the internet puts young adults at a disadvantage when it comes to finding purpose. So I would want to find an essay that agrees with my opinion. One of my claims is that the internet is addicting to young adults so I would want to find an essay that talks about internet addiction. I chose an essay called, “Internet addiction in adolescents: Prevalence and risk factors” and it is by Daria J.Kussa, Antonius J.van,  Rooijbe, Gillian W.Shortercd, and Mark, D.Griffiths. This essay is a very informational essay that discusses internet addiction. The essay has a lot of research from adolescents all over the world so it would be perfect for my essay. It also discusses the risks that internet addiction brings. I considered this source because it is a very factual essay that supports my stance on this prompt. For my claim on internet addiction this essay gives concrete facts that will strengthen my essay. I got this essay by visiting the University of New England’s library page on its website. After the trip to the library for our class, I learned that this way of searching for an informational essay is acceptable. I conducted a quick search and typed the words, “internet addiction”, into the quick search bar. A lot of essays popped up but after I looked over this one I knew it would be the one that I wanted to use. It has tables and examples of internet addiction for many countries. After reading this new essay, I really want to go back and look at some of the points that Sam Anderson made for the internet being a helpful tool. I think it will be nice to compare the essays because for Anderson’s he gives many examples, but this new essay is more direct and it mainly states information.

Final Draft

Matt Hobbs

Professor Emerson

11/9/2017

ENG 110C

 

Disadvantages of the Internet

As we all know, times are changing very fast. Transitions have been made from age to age starting with the Stone Age, followed by the Bronze Age, then the Iron Age, and so on. The Age we are in now has many names. Big Data Age, Social Age, and the Information Age are just a few examples. Each Age is evolving and creating different ways of life. The Big Data Age that we live in now has been going on since around the 70’s. The world that my parents grew up in is unrecognizable compared to the one I am growing up in now. Inventions like the smartphone and portable computers have drastically changed the way children are growing up. The internet is now at everyone’s use, no matter how young. My parents did not have the internet to distract them, so they started working at a much younger age than I did. In my opinion, when you start working you enter the real world. I believe with their lack of distractions that the internet creates, previous generations were able to grow up faster. They were placed into the real world to provide for themselves, causing them to be faced with adversity and real-life situations. Overcoming adversity and dealing with these situations not only pushes one into adulthood, but also helps young adults who are growing up find true meaning. People of today are put at a disadvantage when they are trying to use the internet for meaning-making or pursuing purpose. Young adults of this generation are not being faced with the same adversity. They are not being put in these real-world scenarios where they have to overcome certain problems. Instead, teens and young adults are trying to use the internet to find purpose as almost a substitution for real-life experiences.

A main reason I think young adults or teens are being put at a disadvantage is because the internet is just one big distraction. After reading “In Defense of Distractions” by Sam Anderson, I agreed with most of his points. He makes a great connection tying the internet to being a distraction. He explains,

“The Internet is basically a Skinner box engineered to tap right into our deepest mechanisms of addiction. As B. F. Skinner’s army of lever-pressing rats and pigeons taught us, the most irresistible reward schedule is not, counterintuitively, the one in which we’re rewarded constantly but something called ‘variable ratio schedule,’ in which the rewards arrive at random. And that randomness is practically the Internet’s defining feature: It dispenses its never-ending little shots of positivity” a life-changing e-mail here, a funny YouTube video there” in gloriously unpredictable cycles. (6)”

Anderson discusses the little doses of positivity that the internet shoots, causing people to stay attuned for that random reward. The internet is basically targeting teens because teens and young adults are the most susceptible to becoming addicted to the internet. We have all either experienced this addiction or seen it first hand, I know I cannot go anywhere without my phone. This addiction is nowhere near a tool used by young adults to help find purpose. The distractions of the internet are prolonging the search for meaning by pushing teens off their path for finding purpose.

Addiction is a dangerous thing. Drug, gambling, and shopping are commonly known addictions. A new but very real addiction is internet addiction, and it can now be diagnosed as a mental disorder. An essay called, “Internet addiction in adolescents: Prevalence and risk factors” written by Daria J. Kuss, Antonius J. Van, Rooij, Gillian W. Shorter, and Mark D. Griffiths discusses internet addiction and the risks that it brings to adolescents. They state,

“Using a modified version of the Minnesota Impulsive Disorders Inventory, 4% of US high schoolers were identified as addicted to using the Internet (Liu, Desai, Krishnan-Sarin, Cavallo, & Potenza, 2011). Higher prevalence rates have been reported in South East Asian countries (e.g., Taiwan, Singapore, South Korea and China). For example, using Young’s Internet Addiction Test (1998a) 8% of adolescents in China (Cao, Sun, Wan, Hao, & Tao, 2011) and 10.7% of adolescents in South Korea (Park, Kim, & Cho, 2008) were found to be addicted to using the Internet.”

This data is from six years ago, and the percentage of addicted young adults are rising. In South Korea, about one in every ten adolescents were found to be addicted to using the internet. These addictions mean that young adults are constantly glued to their computers or smartphones. The time they are spending using the internet is taking away from time that could be spent doing things in the real world. This is sheltering these adolescents and further delaying their pursuing of purpose.

Young adults need to find a way to crack this addiction and face reality. All the internet is doing is giving these teenagers a false purpose to try and find. In my opinion, finding your purpose takes real-world situations. This may be why my parents “grew up” at a much earlier age than I have. A person cannot find true purpose through the lives of others. They need to go out on their own and experience different things and not only face, but overcome, adversity. You cannot face these real-world situations behind a screen. You have to go explore and try new things to learn about yourself and grow as a person. Like I said before, kids are easily influenced. Having families, friends, and communities there to help shape children will be a big help in the long run for those kids. Families and friends help raise young adults and keep them on track. No one knows how a child might end up if he or she grows up learning things on the internet. Parents should be the ones influencing their kids, not some stranger behind a screen.

On the internet, young adults idolize and look up to entertainers. Whether it be a professional athlete, musician, or even a celebrity whose fame was caused by something ridiculous, young adults strive to obtain a lifestyle like one these entertainers have. The internet is giving these kids false hope. Young adults who are easily influenced are spending large amounts of time on the internet. Teenagers are idolizing these celebrities who got famous for a one and a million chance.  For example, the NCAA website has an article which talks about how many NCAA basketball players make it to the professional level. It states that only 1.1% make it to the pros. But there are millions of kids who not only dream, but plan on making it to the National Basketball Association. I can relate to this example because my whole family plays or has played basketball at a collegiate level. My two older brothers both played Division I basketball. They put all of their focus on college basketball and sort of forgot about the big picture. This false hope is causing some young adults to not have a backup plan further delaying their transition to reality. The internet is attracting these easily influenced teenagers and showing them ridiculous standards set by rare lifestyles. Young adults think they can achieve these crazy lives, so they do not prepare for the real world and are stuck trying to find their real purpose later in life. Young adults need to find a way to crack this addiction and face reality. All the internet is doing is giving these teenagers a false purpose to try and find.

As I have said, this generation is being negatively affected by the internet. Finding purpose in one’s life has become a harder task to do because of all of these distractions. If this generation were to cut down the use of the internet or even use it for only necessary purposes, it would make this “meaning making” much easier. The limiting of internet use would drastically cut down the distractions in young adults’ lives, giving them time to go out and experience the world. This limiting of the internet would also keep kids away from the persuasion that is false realities. Altogether, the cutting down of internet use would allow young adults to face and overcome adversity and situations in the real world. How you overcome adversity and how you face these problems form who you are as a person. Each problem you overcome is pushing you closer to find your true purpose, and that is why I believe the overuse of the internet is putting young adults at a disadvantage when it comes to finding purpose.

Works Cited:

Sam Anderson Published May 17, 2009. “In Defense of Distraction.” NYMag.com, nymag.com/news/features/56793/.

Adams, Margaret E. Internet Addiction: Prevalence, Risk Factors and Health Effects. Nova Science Publisher’s, Inc., 2017.

First Draft

Matt Hobbs

Professor Emerson

11/9/2017

ENG 110C

 

Disadvantages of the Internet

 

As we all know, times are changing very vast. Transitions have been made from age to age starting with the Stone Age, that being followed by the Bronze Age, then the Iron Age and so on. The Age we are in now has many names. Big Data Age, Social Age, and the Information Age are just some of the names. Each Age evolving and having different ways of life. The Big Data Age that we live in now has been going on since around the 70’s. The world that my parents grew up in is unrecognizable compared to the one I am growing up in. Inventions like the smartphone and portable computers have drastically changed the way children are growing up. The internet is now at everyone’s use, no matter how young. My parents age didn’t have the internet to distract them, they worked at a much younger age than I did. I believe this lack of distractions, the internet, caused previous generations to grow up faster. They were placed into the real world to provide for themselves, causing them to be faced with adversity and real life situations. Overcoming adversity and dealing with these situations not only push one into adulthood but these factors help young adults, who are growing up, find true meaning. People of today are put at a disadvantage when they are trying to use the internet for meaning making or pursuing purpose. Young adults of this generation aren’t being faced with the same adversity. They aren’t being put in these real world scenarios where they have to overcome certain problems. Instead teens and young adults are trying to use the internet to find purpose as almost a substitution for real life experiences.

A main reason I think young adults or teens are being put at a disadvantage is being the internet is just one big distraction. After I “In Defense of Distractions” by Sam Anderson, I agreed with most of his points. He makes a great connection tying to internet to being a distraction, “The Internet is basically a Skinner box engineered to tap right into our deepest mechanisms of addiction. As B. F. Skinner’s army of lever-pressing rats and pigeons taught us, the most irresistible reward schedule is not, counterintuitively, the one in which we’re rewarded constantly but something called “variable ratio schedule,” in which the rewards arrive at random. And that randomness is practically the Internet’s defining feature: It dispenses its never-ending little shots of positivity”a life-changing e-mail here, a funny YouTube video there”in gloriously unpredictable cycles.”(6) He discusses the little doses of positivity that the internet shoots causing people to stay attuned for that random reward. The internet is practically targeting teens because teens and young adults are the most susceptible to becoming addicted to the internet. We have all either experienced this addiction or seen it first hand, I know I can’t go anywhere without my phone. This addiction is no where near a tool used to help young adults find purpose. The distractions of the internet are prolonging the search for meaning by pushing teens off their path for finding purpose. The internet is doing this by flashing teens with this unrealistic way of life that is desired by most. Ads following ads that are showing kids fake shortcuts. “Get rich quick” is a perfect example of a common ad that sways young adults realistic goals.

I like to call these shortcuts false realities. The internet is giving these kids false hope. Teenagers are idolizing these celebrities who got famous of a one and a million chance. For example the NCAA website has an article which talks about how many NCAA basketball players make it to be a professional. It states that only 1.1% make it to the pros. But there are millions of kids who not only dream but plan on making it to the National Basketball Association. I can relate to this example because my whole family plays or has played basketball at a collegiate level. My two older brothers both played division one basketball. They put all of their focus on college basketball and sort of forgot about the big picture. Don’t get me wrong, not having to pay for college must have been nice for them, but they never thought of a backup plan if basketball couldn’t become a career for them. Thankfully both of my brothers are doing just fine now but that’s not the case with every student athlete. This false hope is causing some young adults to not have a backup plan further delaying their transition to reality. That is just one example of many. The internet is attracting these easily influenced teenagers and showing them ridiculous standards set by rare lifestyles. Kids think they can achieve these crazy lives so they don’t prepare for the real world and they are stuck trying to find their real purpose later in life.

Young adults need to find a way to crack this addiction and face reality. All the internet is doing is giving these teenagers a false purpose to try and find. In my opinion, finding your purpose takes real world situations. This may be why my parents “grew up” at a much earlier age than I have. A person can’t find true purpose through the lives of others. They need to go out on their own and experience different thing and not only face but overcome adversity. You can’t face these real world situations behind a screen. You have to go explore and try new things to learn about yourself. Like I said before, kids are easily influenced. Having families, friends, and communities there to help shape children will be a big help in the long run for those kids. Families and friends help raise young adults and keep them on track. No one knows how a child might end up if he or she grows up learning things on the internet. Parents should be the ones influencing their kids not some stranger behind a screen.

As I’ve said, this generation is being negatively affected by the internet. Finding purpose in one’s life has become a harder task to do because of all of these distractions. If this generation were to cut down the use of the internet or even use it for convenience purposes, it would make this “meaning making” much easier. The limiting of internet use would drastically cut down the distractions in young adults life giving them time to go out and experience the world. This limiting of internet would also keep kids away from the persuasion that is false realities. All together, the cutting down of internet use would allow young adults to face and overcome adversity and situations in the real world. How you overcome adversity and how you face these problems form who you are as a person. Each problem you overcome is pushing you closer to finding your true purpose and that is why I believe the overuse of the internet is putting young adults at a disadvantage when it comes to finding purpose.

Library Assignment: Evaluating and Choosing a Source

Matt Hobbs

11/17/2017

ENG 110C

Library Assignment: Evaluating and Choosing a Source

For the last writing prompt, we needed an outside source to incorporate into our essays. My essay is about how the internet puts young adults at a disadvantage when it comes to finding purpose. So I would want to find an essay that agrees with my opinion. One of my claims is that the internet is addicting to young adults so I would want to find an essay that talks about internet addiction. I chose an essay called, “Internet addiction in adolescents: Prevalence and risk factors” and it is by Daria J.Kussa, Antonius J.van,  Rooijbe, Gillian W.Shortercd, and Mark, D.Griffiths. This essay is a very informational essay that discusses internet addiction. The essay has a lot of research from adolescents all over the world so it would be perfect for my essay. It also discusses the risks that internet addiction brings. I considered this source because it is a very factual essay that supports my stance on this prompt. For my claim on internet addiction this essay gives concrete facts that will strengthen my essay. I got this essay by visiting the University of New England’s library page on its website. After the trip to the library for our class, I learned that this way of searching for an informational essay is acceptable. I conducted a quick search and typed the words, “internet addiction”, into the quick search bar. A lot of essays popped up but after I looked over this one I knew it would be the one that I wanted to use. It has tables and examples of internet addiction for many countries. After reading this new essay, I really want to go back and look at some of the points that Sam Anderson made for the internet being a helpful tool. I think it will be nice to compare the essays because for Anderson’s he gives many examples, but this new essay is more direct and it mainly states information.

Works Cited

Works Cited

 

Henig, Robin M. “What is it About 20-Somethings.” Emerging Contemporary Readings for Writers, Barclay Barrios, 2016, pp 199-212.

King, Thomas. “Adults, We Need to Have the Talk.” TEDxMelbourne, 19 Nov. 2015, www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8IrpE9G_v4.

“Critical Reading: Richard Restak “Attention Deficit” – Lessons – Tes Teach.” Tes Teach with Blendspace, www.tes.com/lessons/Qwr8KaOxN5o84A/critical-reading-richard-restak-attention-deficit.

Sam Anderson Published May 17, 2009. “In Defense of Distraction.” NYMag.com, nymag.com/news/features/56793/.

Post #5 TRIAC Naysayer

(TOPIC)With every distraction of growing technology comes an exception. Two outcomes always come with change, the good and the bad.(RESTRICTION) My opinion is that the bad outcome that comes with advancing technology outweighs the good outcome. Of course, not all young minds will crumble to the great responsibility that technology demands. Many young adults will use this technology for the greater good.(ILLUSTRATION) A perfect example of this is Thomas King. King presented a TED talk discussing innovation and how generations are changing. He is working on many projects to make humans more aware environmental issues, one being deforestation caused by palm oil.(ANALYSIS) This example is significant because it shows just how a young adult can use this technology to better our world.(CONCLUSION) With every common outcome such as technology distracting young adults, there are exceptions. This exception being that some young minds, such as Thomas King, can use this technology for innovation not distraction.

Blog #4 Revision Strategy

Matt Hobbs

Prof. Emerson

10/19/2017

ENG 110 C

 

Prompt #2 Revision Plan

I believe that I have a very noticeable flaw in my essay. I clearly need to elaborate on my last couple of paragraphs. Another goal I have is to keep tying my paragraphs back to my thesis. After being told, I noticed that I rarely make that connection. This lack of connection may cause confusion. The reader might be thinking why I added this paragraph or how it relates to the topic. If I make that connection it will help the reader understand my reasoning for adding that thought or argument. A peer gave me some advice to help solve this problem. I have an important word in my thesis which is “dangerous”. She told me to use synonyms for “dangerous” and add those to each paragraph to tie my main idea to that paragraph. Another challenge I can see when finishing my paper is rushing. I really need to take the time and thoughtfully write my ideas and proofread my writing multiple times. I think the proofreading and going over my essay is very important. By taking the time and not rushing I believe i can actually get all of my thoughts on paper. When you rush you often leaves some great thoughts or ideas behind. One way to go about this is just organizing myself. I need to prioritize my time.

Blog Post #3 Klinkinborg Before and After

Before:

Most parents or older adults would probably agree that this generation is addicted to our phones. Would you blame them for thinking that though? If you were to go to even a restaurant, you could experience this addiction first hand, teenagers are on their phones for the duration of the meal, the whole time completely ignoring the people and the real life experiences  in front of that are surrounding them. As Anderson states, “The Internet is basically a Skinner box engineered to tap right into our deepest mechanisms of addiction… unpredictable cycles.” This basically explains that how the internet obtains grabs our undivided attention by randomly mentioning our wants or desires, causing us to stay tuned in searching for information that is relevant to the individual. This addiction, some might say, is very easy to obtain at this younger age when our brains are not aren’t fully developed.

 

After:

Most parents or older adults would probably agree that this generation is addicted to our phones. Would you blame them for thinking that though? Go to a restaurant. You could experience this addiction first hand. Teenagers are on their phones for the duration of the meal. The whole time completely ignoring the people and the real life experiences  in front of them. As Anderson states, “The Internet is basically a Skinner box engineered to tap right into our deepest mechanisms of addiction… unpredictable cycles.” This basically explains that how the internet grabs our undivided attention by randomly mentioning our wants or desires. Causing us to stay tuned in searching for information that is relevant to the individual. This addiction, some might say, is very easy to obtain at this younger age when our brains are not aren’t fully developed.

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